For Literacy we have been doing create your own theme so we have one main theme and 4 sub themes. this is a story from one of my sub topics. What I need to work on is using punctuation and what I did well was writing an interesting story line. Here is my story, please feel free to leave some feedback.
The Tall Tale
Once upon a time there were a couple of pirates looking for some treasure, in the mid 1850’s an ancient sword said to hold incredible power, but with 7 gems to give power to anything they touch (totally not an infinity war or endgame reference) and pirates all over the world have been searching for this sword. A gem has already been found, a gem that can create anything in the world but requires a blood sacrifice. In 1900 the sword still hasn't been found but these people said to be gifted by god, set out to sea to find this sword and end everyone's suffering, but as these pirates rose more dangerous things awoke.
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